诗歌角
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stickywicket Member帖子:26,975我不确定“漂亮”,抄写器。我认为基本属性以正确的顺序列出,“漂亮”是最不重要的。您的绝对是“机智”和“古怪”,我喜欢它。0
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scribbler Member帖子:54"Pretty" was just chosen cos it rhymed!0
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沙龙_K 主持人帖子:3990
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凤凰 Member帖子:625
Hi Sharon,
是的,我们在拐角处;再次感谢
不幸的是,我晚上我的大脑用完了,刚刚完成工作。但是我会回来的,与此同时,我不得不说我真的很喜欢Scribbler的“ A ditty”。SW夫人是对的,那里有很多“机智”和“古怪”
Best wishes,
Phee
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YvonneH Member帖子:1,116
Please post your poems where you feel they belong; I'm hoping you won't mind if I collect your original poems and copy them into this thread where they can be seen and read by all poetry lovers.
Thanks
Yvonne X
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凤凰 Member帖子:625
谢谢,伊冯
I don't know whether anyone's really into poetry here, so I just thought I'd start by offering a few words of encouragement. I think some people are put off writing because they think they don't know enough about poetry, or they think a poem has to rhyme and it's all a bit difficult (it certainly can be).
好吧,我在诗人的阵营中,他们认为写诗是每个人都可以享受的东西。当然,在这个营地并不能使我特别受到想要写诗歌成为精英活动的诗人的欢迎...好吧,没关系
For today, I've just popped down to my archives, returning with one poem with a little rhyme and one without. They're both quite short, from a collection I call the 'pocket poems'. A pocket poem is a nice way to start writing, as it can be just one thought or one picture.
Smiling through the pain
他们问我,
can't you really try
to smile through all
the pain?
我这样做了
但是我看起来很奇怪,
they didn't ask
again.
摇摇欲坠的鸽子
在我的窗外
there's a silver wood pigeon,
栖息在石灰的分支上。
It's a windy day
and the branch is swaying.
The pigeon wobbles a little,
但是她坚持很好
:>)
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凯尔特人 Member帖子:32
Here is one of mine hope you like it.
生命的赐予者已经倒下,现在躺在地上
Soon it will be no longer there, you will not see it however you stare
所有人都会走过它跌落的地方,没有痕迹让您告诉您,
但是很快就在其铺设的位置上弹出一个简单的小刀片,
紧随其后的是更多,直到可以计算得分为止,
的投入er that has gone below, has given life to those that grow,
因此,我们所有人肯定会收获的人都应该感谢下雨。
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Kitty Member帖子:3,574
我最好把瓦尔咖啡馆的成员放在一个伊冯的成员中。
希望Esme
埃斯梅今天对我微笑
and the sun came out from behind a dark cloud.
我弯腰微笑着说..
'Little one, the world is yours,
我想知道你会做什么?’
您的生活会漫长而充实吗?
For this is what we wish for you.
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凤凰 Member帖子:625
嗨,凯尔特人和凯斯,
I didn't realise people were writing poetry in Val's Cafe. Thanks for sharing, Kath, and I hope your book is going well.
凯尔特人,欢迎来到诗歌角。我真的很喜欢您的诗,尤其是它的图像和充满希望的信息,因为它遇到了我。
Do you enjoy nature poetry? Here's a poem I wrote last January, after listening to a piece of music called 'The Wind in the Plain'...
整个早晨,冬小麦都站在其有序行中。
中午,随着云层的涌入,它进入thrash的喉咙,
现在正在探究,现在上升,虽然内陆是绿色的,
a playground for some mystic mover brandishing a hearty hand,
and in amongst the crazing crops a harvest mouse is rushing here
然后在那里,然后再回来,她的珠子的眼睛欢呼雀跃,
她红色的皮毛a-刺,晶须在微风中吹来,
until the early evening, when the plain once more may stand at ease.
...这是一只收获鼠标(来自Wikipedia的图像),
Best wishes,
Phee
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凯尔特人 Member帖子:32
Hi Phee really lovely. Shows how well you observed nature to be able to picture that in your mind and transfer into words that others may see the same Stay safe, celtic
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Kitty Member帖子:3,574
The Tena Lady
She would always dread parties or theatre trips,
你怎么能滴水的膀胱去那里?
在出门购物哦,该怎么办,
finding a route that includes every loo!
Her handbag contained six pairs of clean knickers,
但是打开它会让她感到不安!
但是后来她发现了一些节省了理智的东西
并帮助她保留了一些虚荣心。
她现在保留了一个如此微小和整洁的包裹
a pretty silk bag, small and discreet.
它拥有Tena Lady拥有气味控制
so she now visits friends, achieves every goal.
她去看照片,野餐,聚会。
She mixes with folk who are real arty fartys.
She also plays hockey and netball and tennis,
并计划前往罗马和威尼斯。
亲爱的女士们,不要在家哭泣,
你应该买的是tena女士
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凤凰 Member帖子:625
凯斯,你应该将其发送给Tena
凯尔特人,非常感谢您的客气话。不幸的是,我的工作大部分时间都让我忙碌,但是我真正喜欢的办公时间是在听音乐,看到我的想法以及写关于它们的东西。
我还写了各种现实生活经历,通常是为了加油。今年早些时候,我写了一首关于管理的诗最后,要获得无障碍淋浴的许可。(凯斯(Kath)的作品中的“ loo”一词使我想起了这个)
One day in May last year I bought a flat way out of town --
它在坚固的砖块中,有些红色有些棕色。
there's level access in and after that a nifty lift,
在我的公寓里,我只需要一两件事。
我需要洗澡,然后洗个澡。
我问我是否可以这样做。“是的,”公寓委员会说,
但是后来他们改变了主意,并做出了“不”的回答。
我问他们为什么不能 - 只是他们这么说。
我一直在问'为什么?”,直到他们说我可以 -
I had to get an expert, a surveyor from the 'hood;
he came one Monday with his pen and clipboard, camera too,
给浴室和东西拍照,凝视在厕所后面。
He sent his findings late on Thursday night, in a report --
它覆盖了五个整页,所以它不是很短。
他的费用并不便宜,但值得我必须付的价格 -
他说我可以bespoke low-rise shower tray!
(好极了!)
Best wishes,
Phee
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凯尔特人 Member帖子:32
像那个phee一样,是的,测量师的抢购商人,我在退休之前与他们进行了很多交往,因为我是一名建筑商,而且在大多数情况下,我可以在没有他们的帮助的情况下完成这项工作,而我在很多情况下都可以做到这一点。我的工作没有麻烦,我已经退休了20年。照顾凯尔特人
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凤凰 Member帖子:625
再次感谢凯尔特人
这位测量师的小时费率为90英镑。£90!不仅如此,他花了一些时间,可以说,所以我在收到他的发票方面确实有些摇摇欲坠。我很高兴不将这些费用添加到所有工作中,但是委员会声称必须进行调查...在充实的时间里,他们已经失去了建筑物的原始计划(D'(D)哦!)。
当室内墙开始崩溃时,建造者参与其中!幸运的是,我不必就项目的那部分咨询委员会,建造者再次将其重新放在一起而没有使事情变得复杂,这总是很好️
Have you written any poems about your building work?
Best wishes,
Phee
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凯尔特人 Member帖子:32
No Phee not yet, maybe one day I will. I have a few more that I have saved copies but most of them have gone to the poetry heaven in the sky, for this reason my family asked me to find and save what I could, I did this and made a CD and gave a copy to my 3 daughters and grandchildren at the same time I wrote my memories down and had them printed so my future generations will be able to know who their ancestor was,as I am researching my family tree and have traced and confirmed my grandfathers 5 time removed I know nothing about them except my direct Grandad so I know now that this will not happen in my case, stay safe celtic
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凤凰 Member帖子:625
Well, I hope you will, celtic; I'm sure they'd be a good read
It's great that you've made a CD of your poems, and you've written down your memories. Stay safe yourself
Best wishes,
Phee
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凯尔特人 Member帖子:32
Hi everyone hope your all well and if like me you having to stay in finding things to do can be hard, although I have a lot of hobbies, wood and stone carving and art among them, I do like to try other things, that is why I have come back to poetry, and thinking about writing more, I thought some of you may feel the same as I, so decided to ask if you would like to join me in writing a poem, I start the first few lines then anyone could write and add a few lines and if enough join in it would be interesting to see how it turns out. The following is my effort,
当我经过时,快来跟我同行
查看地球和天空的奇观
凝视日落和日出
While standing on the Bridge of Sighs.
over to you folk
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Kitty Member帖子:3,574
新冠病毒
由凯瑟特(Kathleent)
It started in China - so they say,
每天都会添加数字。
Italy, Spain, and good old Blighty
它甚至传播给A的美国。
家庭分开,
不能亲吻或拥抱,
任何一个都不差,或任何年龄的年龄
对所有规则和混乱感到焦虑。
Self isolating and social distancing
这些是今天的口号。
但是我不会害怕,因为我听到了
那是复活节,它都会消失。
BOOM BOOM☺️
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凤凰 Member帖子:625
嗨,凯尔特人,
希望您还可以,并继续享受您的爱好。正如我在其他地方提到的那样,我习惯在室内,所以我一直像往常一样继续前进!但是,对于通常能够出去的人来说,目前必须感到非常奇怪。
Nice idea, a bit of co-writing. Here's your four lines followed by four from me:
当我经过时,快来跟我同行
查看地球和天空的奇观
凝视日落和日出
While standing on the Bridge of Sighs.
因此凯尔特人说话 - 菲(Phee)
with buttered bread and soup to sup,
为了观看经常饥饿的工作
especially through the misty murk.
我经常认为将一些小吃带入诗歌很高兴。我想知道什么?(野外眼镜)
Best wishes,
Phee
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凯尔特人 Member帖子:32
我希望看到的很有趣的很有趣。很难无法出去,但是当我的膝盖允许我时,我每天都开始走30分钟,我确实想念我的艺术团体和一个残疾的俱乐部,但我意识到我很幸运有打电话和Skype我的家人和朋友,所以无论需要多长时间,我都会通过,您认为这会在我们的诗结束之前发生吗?保持安全的凯尔特人
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凤凰 Member帖子:625
是的,这里希望有更多的访客,以畅销书的想法吸引
凯尔特人,您能够在可能的情况下跟上步行。如果我能够走路,那就是我要做的。我的一个邻居每天下午都在车道上上下步调,我也发现几个人走路,慢跑或沿着路上骑自行车。不过,今天,我主要观察到一只男性和雌性黑鸟在草坪上为昆虫觅食。也许他们有几只嘴可以喂养
您的俱乐部听起来很有趣。我希望您已经期待今年晚些时候(希望如此)回到他们。我也喜欢艺术。我不是很擅长,但是我喜欢使用称为“ Artrage”的软件程序来创建事物,并嘲笑结果。目前,我仍在工作(从家里)上班,但是如果发生这种变化,我将花费大量时间在各种创意项目上。是的,在这些奇怪的时期与人们保持联系是很好的
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凯尔特人 Member帖子:32
Hi Phee sorry I've not been on for a while but I've been so busy with one thing and another, and I'm glad as the days seem to pass so quickly. In regards to art you will find loads of tuition on YouTube and it's all free and although I have been doing art for about 5 years I still need help. Phee if you can entice birds and insects into your garden it will help to pass the time, I feed the same birds every day and spend time watching them eat the bread and fat balls and I enjoy it, also there are many groups on the PC that you can use to help pass the time away. I've in the middle of building a small pond out of an old plastic dustbin and yesterday I put up another bird box that I made. I love using my hands during the day then in the evening I can go on my Laptop when free to relax and see how other folk are in other forums. It seems we are the only ones interested in the best sellerYou stay safe and keep as busy as you can, all the very best. celtic
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Kitty Member帖子:3,574
对于所有泼尼松龙的人
我对所有pred的人都有一个问题,
how to cope with the craving for bread?
你像我么
坐在长椅上
当您看电视时
用一盘三明治
there on your knee?
And then of course there is pizza,
奶酪和洋葱,番茄,香肠。
it isn't a crime
每当你用餐时
just take your time
带有酥脆的一面沙拉
with flavours sublime.
但是有时候我需要的是薯片,
我对那些碳水化合物的渴望我会喂养。
我应该有菠萝,
橙色或苹果
当我抓紧时,
with weight I have gained
my efforts are really quite laughable!!
凯瑟琳·T。
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Jaybees Member帖子:11
很高兴找到诗歌角,我不知道它存在!我发现写诗有助于分心我的问题。
I've been putting pen to paper during Lockdown writing about the Virus and also Trump但是在较轻的一面,这里有一些我写给自己的简短
什物
Will always tend
To send a person
绕弯曲
Clutter and mess
Will cause distress
So tidy up to make it less
碳水化合物和脂肪
Would make a gnat
Gain weight (they are known for that !)
So hear my plea
或者你会看到
如果吃了
你可能看起来像我!
CBT
I'm wearing out
毫无疑问
Keep cheerful s'what
这全都是关于
减轻疼痛
You train your brain
想想阳光
Not of rain
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Achy_g Member帖子:6
哦,我的天啊!我没有意识到我们有一个诗歌页。
I write and perform under the alias Lateral G. I'm on YouTube and Facebook - one of the new challenges I took on during the first lockdown was beginning to use video software, since I was unable to perform my poetry live. In October, some of my poetry was also included in a Bradford Libraries anthology of lockdown poems.
我的大多数诗歌都是话题和政治性,因此我将尝试为这种环境选择一个不太分裂的诗歌。
Here's one I wrote last week.
断开连接
今天我得知体育现在有虚拟的奥迪nces
People projected from their living rooms
Into stadium seats they once would have filled
球员们看不见和闻所未闻
Who perform their tasks in a silent bubble
两个独立的世界
断开连接。
这就是我的感受。
I remember nightlife:
A fizzy, heady, exciting world
音乐,跳舞,友善的陌生人
和气氛 - 人群的嗡嗡声
在屏幕后面,我什么都没有。
只是断开连接。
我与
在这个虚拟世界之外感觉到
The gradual withdrawal from technology
That leaves us behind as we age
加速了,离开了我
断开连接
I can probably dress it up
As a morally conscious decision
脱离接触
Like a hipster, refusing to use a smartphone
But the truth is I'm disconnected and alone.
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